14×17″ Charcoal from last night at the Art League
Very similar stages of completion but after a nights sleep and about 15 more minutes of work, the one on the right looks far better.
The one on the left is how I stopped with the model last night at 8pm.
I thought it was finished but when I looked this am with fresh eyes I saw some issues I needed to address.
- Jaw too low where it meets the chin, decrease the jowl and strengthen jaw line
- Too much highlight on cheek and forehead. Shade and tighten up/define highlights
- Eye too dark. Highlight and define.
- Separate head outline from background and darken head shadow on shoulder to make the head “pop out”.